🎩🎩 THE GHOST ☕☕
OF EDRINE 💫💫💫
( Save me and make me yours!!)
~ Episode 54~ { Final }
<< Fifty years later <<
Jamal stop playing around with the ancestral
sword, Taijin yelled breathing heavily
Jamal!!! Are you trying to poke the sky, where
the hell are you, he screamed looking around
A little boy of about four years appeared behind
him, As Taijin turned back screamed in fear
The boy scoffed
Did you just scoff, hey are you a little kid at all,
why aren’t you behaving your age, Taijin
snapped
Well immortals grow really slowly than humans,
he was fifty but as an immortal he was like a
four years old kid
Jamal, just because you can use the ancestral
sword doesn’t mean you should play with it, it’s
dangerous, I can get you another sword, Taijin
said calmly
I don’t want to, other swords are boring, Jamal
blurted
Look at this spoilt brat huh, you shouldn’t be
stubborn, you are a future leader, Taijin said
Jamal rolled his eyes
Jamal??, Jamal is the son of Keeva and Adrian,
a descendant of two true gods, he wasn’t
named a true god but he was born with the
power of a true god
He is the God of all gods, meaning when he
geta older, all the gods will be under his control,
his powers is generalized and not specialized,
that means he can do everything
In few years, with training he will definitely be
the strongest ever
Even as a kid he is still so powerful and can
even command the ancestral sword, infact even
the weapons of other true gods
And there is something unique about his
appearance, he had a white hair, his hair was
white when he was born. But even with that he
looks like his father completely
Come here, your mum must be looking for you
by now, Taijin said
But just then Keeva appeared before them and
Jamal hid behind Taijin immediately
Keeva glared at him, he started playing with his
fingers innocently
Keeva snapped her hand and he appeared
before her. Then she pulled his ears
Ouch mum, he cried
It will be worst than this next time you touch my
sword and I am waiting because I know you will
definitely come back, She said. He pouted his
lips cutely
That naughty brat, Taijin chuckled
Chloe hasn’t been around for days, where is she,
Keeva asked
Oh didn’t she tell you?, Her lover was reborn five
days ago and she won’t leave the little kid alone,
please tell her it’s child abuse, Taijin replied
That means Mason is dead right?, Keeva asked.
He nodded
I am surprised you don’t know that, I mean you
should know without her even telling you. He
died one year ago due to kidney failure and
luckily he was reborn immediately, Taijin said.
And that ghost Rissa was reborn yesterday, I
wonder why it took long, he added. Keeva
smiled and turned to him
Please help me get Jamal prepared, we are
going to visit his grandparents today, Keeva
said
At your service ma’am, Taijin bowed. Keeva
chuckled.
Taijin disappeared with Johan
Today looks like a good day for a walk, Keeva
mumbled staring at the sky
Well it had been fifty years since Adrian
sacrificed himself, the world had been peaceful
but she hadn’t been peaceful
Every night she dreamt of him and longed for
him but unfortunately she couldn’t even touch
him in her dreams
And in day time she often saw him, but of
course they were all hallucinations, it was as if
she was going crazy.
She closed her eyes and sighed
<<<
Let me gooooooooo, I want to go home, Reeva
screamed crying like a baby. She suddenly
stopped and gasped
Huh that’s Manuel, he’s staring at me right,
awwn Manuel is so cute, dad come and see
Manuel I want to get married to him, she said
pulling Manisha’s arm
Mum stop it Manuel is dead, Manisha cried.
Reeva ran mad after that day and she was still
locked in the shadow prison, Manisha had been
taking care of her
Taus was next door, he was lying down silently
and in pain, Death was better than that type of
life, it was torture everyday, he now even looked
very old
Keeva moved away from the prison and met
someone on her way out
Goddess Keeva, Sheila bowed
I sent for you ten years ago, why are you just
coming, Keeva asked
High Goddess, I loved staying on earth, finally I
got my opportunity of exploring love, she
grinned. Keeva glared at her
Are you kidding, don’t tell me you became a play
girl, Keeva gasped
There a lot of cute and handsome mortals, how
can I stick to one, she chuckled
Keeva flicked her forehead immediately
Ouch it hurts, Sheila cried
It should! how dare you mess around!, Keeva
snapped
I sent for you since because you are needed
here, I have a position for you, Keeva said
I don’t want it because I am going back to the
mortal realm, I haven’t finished exploring love,
Sheila said
Sheila, Keeva snapped
Oh I came to visit my mom, it’s been long
anyway, Sheila said smiling. Keeva sighed
Oh before I forget, I heard my cousin is very
handsome like his dad and I came to greet you
as your future daughter in law, Sheila said
I am definitely roasting you alive, Keeva
growled. Sheila disappeared before she could
get to her
Arhhhhh, that brat!!!!
<<<
Keeva held Jamal as they stood beside the
Edrine sea. She stared at the sea sadly
She wished she had spent more time with
Adrian as a ghost. She really missed him like
hell. She missed his cuteness and craziness.
And d@mn they were always fighting
You are always here, Waylen said. Keeva turned
immediately
Hey Jamal, where are you going with your mum,
Waylen asked
To see my grand parents, Jamal replied. Waylen
smiled and looked at Keeva
You are finally taking him to them?, he asked.
Keeva nodded
Good luck then, Waylen smiled.
Thunder suddenly clapped violently and the
weather changed
Is something happening, Keeva asked looking
at the sky
I will go check that out, see you then, Waylen
said and disappeared
Keeva turned to leave too, when someone called
her. She turned back
You are Keeva aren’t you, an old woman said,
she turned and stared at her
You still look young, it’s really good to be an
immortal, the woman said
Tamina?, Keeva gasped. Tamina smiled
Huh is that Adrian’s son, Tamina asked
How come he’s still small, it’s been so long,
Tamina mumbled
We are immortals, we don’t grow like mortals,
Keeva chuckled. Tamina smiled softly.
You know now that I am older, I am
appreciating my gift, I am happy I didn’t get rid
of it, Tamina said
Tamina!!! Someone screamed. Tamina rolled
her eyes
How many times have I told you to stop
screaming my name Victor, are you a kid?, She
snapped
Sorry I wanted to tell you that i was leaving, I am
going out with Kein and Leon, he told her.
Fine, have a nice day, she said. He nodded and
hurried away immediately.
Keeva wiped Kein’s memory of Chloe, infact
Chloe was gone from everyone’s memory apart
from Tamina, Tamina and Victor started dating
in college and got married years later.
Kein married a woman he met in college too,
Leon married Maddie, Tamina’s friend but she
passed away early this year
See you later then I have somewhere to go,
Keeva said. Tamina nodded and began to walk
away
But then she stopped and watched Keeva and
Jamal as they left
What a sad fate, she mumbled
<<<<
Keeva held Jamal’s hand while staring at Adrian
parent’s house
She hadn’t met them for a while, but she had
been checking on them
Is this my grandparents house, Jamal asked.
Keeva nodded
Now let’s go in, Keeva said and came closer to
the door, then she stopped
Memories of her training Adrian in the house
flashed through her memory and her eyes
became teary
Mum don’t cry, Jamal mumbled. Keeva smiled
and ruffled his hair
Just as she brought her hand closer to knock
the door opened!!
It was Bianca
Keeva, Bianca stuttered
Although she had been there a lot of times, she
hadn’t gone to face them
Adrian had told her to wipe their memories but
she couldn’t bear to, when she tried wiping it,
they both begged her not to
They prefer remembering their son even if he
dies forever
Bianca’s eyes fell on Jamal and tears filled her
eyes
The young boy looked like Adrian in his
childhood
She reduced her height to his level and touched
his face sadly
Bianca who’s that, Teddy asked coming out. He
stopped when he saw Keeva and Jamal
The both of them now looked very old, it had
been fifty years after all
Teddy smiled sadly
Few days after Adrian’s last visit, Bianca was
discharged from the hospital. They went back
home and met the letter Adrian left
He explained everything to them in the letter. It
was shocking and difficult to believe at first but
Teddy remembered his grandfather telling him
that they were generational worshippers of the
god of the sun
But he didn’t think any of those things were real,
he couldn’t believe that he gave birth to the god
of the sun. When Keeva came to wipe their
memories, they begged her not to and that they
were going to wait for Adrian
Hopefully he will come back before they pass
away. But will that really happen, they were both
old and may die anytime soon. Keeva sighed
<< Hours later <<
It was already night And it was raining really
hard. Keeva and Jamal were still in Adrian’s
house
Teddy and Bianca were feeding Jamal, they
definitely don’t want to let him go and it brought
smile in Keeva’s face
She decided that she was going to be bringing
Jamal everyday since Adrian wasn’t coming
back, at least they should smile a lot before
dying
She went to close the window, Gosh the storm!!
Was something happening? She suddenly heard
the door bell ring
Bianca and Teddy were busy with Jamal so
they didn’t hear it
She sighed and went to open the door
Oh no she’s hallucinating again, she mumbled
and closed the door. But then the door bell rang
again
Is she imagining things now? She opened the
door again
I am going really crazy, she mumbled and
closed the door again
For the third time the door bell rang, this time
Teddy and Bianca heard it
Who’s that, Teddy asked
Did you hear that, Keeva asked in return
The door bell?, Bianca asked
Keeva sighed and opened the door again. He
was still standing there
Gosh why won’t the imagination go away, she
mumbled and was about to close the door but
he held it with his hand
It’s me Keeva, he mumbled. She froze
You aren’t imagining things it’s me Adrian, he
said
He was looking handsome as usual, infact he
looked like he just left yesterday, he was looking
very young, He was wearing a long white robe
but it was wet, obviously because of the rain
Teddy came to the door wondering who he was
but then he also froze
Can you see him too, Keeva asked
Adrian, Teddy stuttered. Adrian came closer and
hugged him. Keeva was still looking lost
I am sorry dad, it’s my fault, Adrian mumbled
also in tears
Maybe I am dreaming, Keeva mumbled
touching her head
Adrian pulled away from teddy and hugged her
I am real baby, you aren’t dreaming, he muttered
and she burst into tears immediately
That’s not true I am definitely dreaming, stop
lying, she cried
It really me, can’t you feel my aura?, he asked
He pulled away and came in fully
What’s going, Bianca asked looking worried, but
she almost passed out when she was who it
was
Adrian held her before she could fall down. She
burst into tears immediately. Even Teddy
couldn’t hold his tears
Stupid boy, heartless boy how could you, she
cried hitting his chest
He also pulled away from her and slowly went
on his knees
I am very sorry mom and dad please forgive me,
he said also crying
I was inconsiderate and selfish, but I am really
sorry, I tried very hard to come back, I am sorry I
am late, Keeva I am sorry, he wept
Teddy pulled his up and hugged him
What are you am sorry for, you are a hero, you
saved your son and your wife and sacrificed
yourself instead, you are my role model, Teddy
told him. Adrian sniffed
Teddy then pulled away, that’s was when Adrian
saw James who had been watching the drama
He fell on his knees again and burst into tears.
He held Jamal and wept bitterly
Stop crying dad, Jamal mumbled but it made
him cry harder
He couldn’t believe he had a son, like he had a
son!!
Keeva went on her knees and hugged the both
of them
Bianca and Teddy watched them silently
<<<<
My premodial spirit was divided into pieces, so I
spent all my time gathering the pieces together
When the Ancient God saw how hard I worked
and how stubborn I was, he decided to fix it for
me, but I had to heal. During my healing period I
became unconscious
I was unconscious for ten years and when I
opened my eyes, I came back. That was why it
was raining
But I looked for you first and traced you here,
Adrian narrated
You jerk you have no idea what I went through,
Keeva sobbed
I know, that was why I made sure you were
pregnant before leaving, because I knew you
won’t feel that hurt with my off spring next to
you, Adrian said
Keeva punched his chest immediately
Ouch that hurt, he cried
I will make sure you pay for leaving me after our
wedding, she snapped
I am willing to bear any punishment, my
goddess, he said. She burst into laughter
He pulled her closer and kissed her neck
I missed you babe, how about we make another
sibling for Jamal, Adrian said
Keeva kissed him almost immediately, he
smiled and kissed her back
I missed you like hell, I missed your touch like
mad, Take me really hard, she mumbled
Your wish is my command goddess, He
whispered
Just as he was about to remove her shirt, Jamal
came in
They both jumped up immediately. He stared at
them innocently
I thought I always told you to knock, Keeva
snapped
I did but you didn’t reply, Jamal said
You should have gone back then, why did you
come in, Keeva snarled
Don’t yell at him Keeva, why are you here baby?,
Adrian asked him.
He immediately went to hug Adrian.
I want to sleep with you tonight, He said
Huh!!
Huh with me?, Adrian asked. He nodded
But Jamal I want to make another sibling for
you, Adrian mumbled
Adrian!!!, Keeva yelled
I don’t want another sibling, Jamal mumbled
and laid on the bed
It’s a matter of life and death Jamal, don’t do
this to me, Adrian begged. Keeva laughed like a
lunatic
Let’s sleep together Jamal, mum really loves
that idea of yours, Keeva grinned. Adrian glared
at her
Adrian climbed the bed and carried him on his
shoulders
Daddy, Jamal screamed
Sorry baby, but I can’t let you ruin it, do you
know how many years I waited, Adrian said and
carried him out of the room
Keeva almost died of laughter
Adrian came back to the room but then
someone rushed into the room immediately
Okay who is it again!!
Chloe?
This jerk I can’t believe you came back, she said
crying
He stared at her sadly
I missed you, I missed you like hell, she
screamed and hugged him
I am sorry, he mumbled
She pulled away and stared at him sadly
What happened? Why did you……
She had not finished talking when he carried her
on his shoulder and dropped her outside
Sorry baby, let’s talk later, Adrian said and
slammed the door in her face
Hey you jerk!!!! Chloe screamed
Adrian went back Keeva
You have no idea how much I want you, he
whispered and began to kiss her hungrily
<<<<<
Is that the end of the story?, A young girl asked
Michelle my dear, that’s definitely not the end,
that the beginning of a new story, but to us
that’s the end, Jasmine said
Grandma you love saying this story a lot, you
said it a lot of times, Another child said
Jasmine smiled
Did you really see the god of the sun, the
goddess of the moon, the goddess of stars, and
others gods, The second child asked
Travis, the story is not real, they don’t exist,
Michelle said
That’s not true right grandma, Travis asked
Jasmine nodded
But mum said it isn’t true, that’s it’s a myth,
Michelle said
You can ask your grandpa, Jasmine said
Grand pa, is it true, Travis asked
Here you go with your story, it’s been a long
time already, how come you remember
everything, Izna scoffed
Jasmine smiled and faced the kids
Yes you grandpa was there but he didn’t see
everything that happened because he was
always fainting, she said
Jasmine!!!!
OMG grand pa, you have been fainting since
young, I thought you started at old age, Travis
laughed
This brat come here, Izna screamed. Jasmine
rolled her eyes
Won’t you ever forgive me, it’s been forty years
already, I didn’t mean to faint on our wedding,
he yelled
Be careful so you don’t faint out of anger, she
said and started walking away
Jasmine!!!!
The End.
Written by Rosemary 🌹
So the story finally ended, who’s your favorite
character?, the character you h@të the most?,
favorite scene and the scene you h@tëd?
And finally how do you feel about the
story?👁️🗨️👁️🗨️
